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http://brokencircle22.livejournal.com/3009.html#cutid1

^^^^ frakkers you have GOT to read this!! Authored by Broken - this is a frakking hilarious crack!fic!! and let me tell you, the 2nd chapter is frakking hilarious aswell Seriously, this had me laughing so much i choked!!

Broken and Garbo are both frakking crack!fic queens and they're both on this forum! mwahahah!!

BTW you two, i'm waiting patiently for the 2nd chapter of your joint fic no pressure!

Airlock wrote:Yeah i'm double posting, but no i don't care! lol


http://brokencircle22.livejournal.com/3009.html#cutid1

^^^^ frakkers you have GOT to read this!! Authored by Broken - this is a frakking hilarious crack!fic!! and let me tell you, the 2nd chapter is frakking hilarious aswell Seriously, this had me laughing so much i choked!!

Broken and Garbo are both frakking crack!fic queens and they're both on this forum! mwahahah!!

BTW you two, i'm waiting patiently for the 2nd chapter of your joint fic no pressure!

1. Second that!
2. Second that, too !

Erm...some writing news from me. I entered this competition a while ago (a play competition). I got a call to say that of all the entries in the East of England, I was one of the 20 finalists! Isn't that brilliant?

DD Agent wrote:Erm...some writing news from me. I entered this competition a while ago (a play competition). I got a call to say that of all the entries in the East of England, I was one of the 20 finalists! Isn't that brilliant?

That's wonderful!
Congratulations!!!

Thank you!

Oh.... I'm becoming more and more annoyed by myself....

I just can'd do plot! I can write about one scene for years, I can describe the feelingsa of every person in that scene, but to move on to the next scene and to make a plot- impossible..... In the end everything is so stupid..... I started that fic about Ellen making Laura jealous, but I'm stuck..... I have in mind two scenes, but before them I have to do something.... and I can't. I can't jump from the beginning to the end, but I can't do anything else..... frak.

Why don't you put a link to the fic here (from a site such as 4shared or something) so that maybe me or someone else could have a look at it and see what could connect it all together? Sometimes things need a fresh pair of eyes.

Do you have any other projects to work on at the moment, just to take a break from your fic?

To take a break sounds just what I need actually....

Thanks for the advice (((DD)))!

I changed the mood a bit and finished one other idea of mine I'm really sonfused by because it is something I haven't done before:

What if.... You failed, Sine Qua Non....

I hope there will be some criticism about it, because, except you, in the forums, noone in real life has even a slight idea of what fanfiction is.....

When the link has been finalised by the admin, I'll take a look at it.

Oh, I totally forgot about the approval of the admin....

here is the link again, I hope it works this time:

http://survivalinstinct.net/viewstory.php?sid=1578

I'm really grateful for sites like this, because the only way to learn is by criticism... And what annoys me most is that people think that if you post a link with fanfic, you are just looking for approval and admiration, which is just... stupid. I want opinions, disagreement, mentioning of mistakes... But to review critically is also hard, judging by myself....

by the way, what happened with the competition?

Thanks for the updated link, I will look at that tonight and give feedback. Here, in the forum, alright?

As for the comp, I've got the development day this Wednesday where I work on my play with nineteen other finalists and some professional playwrights. Hopefully I should get a call after that about whether I'm one of the four who get it performed!

I really liked this, although it was quite sad. Seriously sad, as it tear jerking OMG why aren't Bill and Laura together! Damn good idea, not many people would see that ep from that perspective, so thumbs up.

Quibbles. These sentences don't really feel right to me, I don't know why.

"His Sine Qua Non he would never have the right to love again."

"When the sky fall over them" Should it possibly be fell over them?

But zat is all, very good fic m'dear.

Wow!! Working with professional playwrights!! This is my dream.... You are soo lucky!! Can you tell something more? How do they work? Are they too annoying or leave you do what you want... stuff like that? Pleeease... I'm so curious!

Thanks for the review! Yeah.... the falling sky was not a good idea but I absolutely want the idea of Laura (The Sine Qua Non) whom Bill is not allowed to love anymore... maybe I will try to say it in different words... when I got the time.

Thank you a lot for the help!

I will give you a full and detailed account tomorrow when I come back. It should be awesome though, because although I love writing novels, I do like writing plays too, because I love Drama.

Glad I could help, do you mind doing me a favour in return? I'm entering another competition, a Dark Tales short story comp, and I've got my second draft but would love someone to go over it.

http://www.4shared.com/file/67816294/7341ea43/The_Spaces_In_Between.html

That would be brilliant if you could, and it would be awesome if you could send me your MSN (if you have one) so we can exchange more writing know how! I could also send you a couple of playscripts I've written as well.

Novels against plays.... I can't decide which one I like more.... maybe both, just like you.... Maybe the key word here is just "writing"- everything, everywhere.....

I've just downloaded your story, sory for being so slow with answers but I actually visit the forum only in the weekend- I don't have much time (frakking school..... university preparations and so on....)

I liked how naturally you mix the scenes- one scene falls into another so slowly and so invisibly... Maybe one of the biggest signs that you have a lot of practice
Loved the mystery idea- original one and the fog is just the right place for a ghost....
"The police had come, the police had suspected, the police had left."- very good way for saying it. There is something about short sentences which always impresses me more than some long philosophical variant.... Short sentences are like a hit. One. Then another. Third.... They have more influence on the reader's mind than anything else.
The end with the rose was good, made me think about the connection between the ghost and the world he had left....

I'm not a native speaker and really bad at grammar, so in that part I cannot be helpful at all...

Great work!! I love mystery stories!! If you have something more, give it to me, pleeeease!


My msn and skype are : Milva113 and I'll bre happy to add you
You already know my profile in Survival Instinct where I post all my fics so if you have time, I will be happy to see you there. By the way, don't you have registartion there? Or in FF.net?


Have a nice week